Artist Army {old thread}

[Gatanitazul]

August ~ Great job, it looks really good! The only problems that I see with it is the legs/feet. The front right paw looks really good, but at the top of the front right leg, it seems a bit too small. On the back right leg, the foot/leg doesn't seem long enough, and seems a bit too far up on the body, near the stomach area. [I hope this all makes sense to you, I feel like I'm wording everything horribly :D]

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Just finished this up for my shop, I hope the person receiving this likes it :D

[Calix]

Oh, thank you ^-^ I understood exactly what you meant. That far back leg gave me so much trouble D: I wanted her to be sitting more on her haunches rather than legs, but I don't think I did it well Dx


I really love the picture you posted <3 The only suggestion I have is to smooth the edges in some places, they're a little jagged. Otherwise, it's just amazing <3 Those belly/neck details make my eyes scream in delight ;D The overall pose is really good too, front view is always so hard to pull off but you made it amazing.

[persey]

Help on this please?
I was looking through my pictures because I just thought I would and I found this from over a year ago but I'm not sure how to add hand detail or fingernails...
Any suggestions

Really like the 2 headed thing above this post its amazing!

[Calix]

Help on this please?
I was looking through my pictures because I just thought I would and I found this from over a year ago but I'm not sure how to add hand detail or fingernails...
Any suggestions

Really like the 2 headed thing above this post its amazing!

I don't know if we can critique that since it's just a color-in? s:

[Gatanitazul]

August ~ Ah yes, I am not the best making really smooth/cartoony lines, but eh, practice makes perfect, right? :D Thank you!

[persey]

Help on this please?
I was looking through my pictures because I just thought I would and I found this from over a year ago but I'm not sure how to add hand detail or fingernails...
Any suggestions

Really like the 2 headed thing above this post its amazing!

I don't know if we can critique that since it's just a color-in? s:

What?! Ive never seen that picture before in my life?? it should have been this viewtopic.php?t=369441

Sorry! -.-

[Misnake]

Just finished this up for my shop, I hope the person receiving this likes it [/list]

Wow, I love how it ended up. :3

For the other things, I have nothing much to say.

@persey: The picture is nice, maybe removing the lines and adding shading instead of the lines? Making the edges a bit more smooth (aka, clear and straighter, not bumpy where not needed) and maybe a bit more detail to the black shade background? Also, handa have nails, it would look much more like hand with nails. In otherwise, I like it very much.

[Winterfaux]

I need some feedback~
I drew up this creature a few days ago;
http://oi55.tinypic.com/2ep32vr.jpg
He was meant to be a mix between a sight hound of some sort and cheetah and maybe even some hyena with the mane. Anyway, feedback on the creature itself would be good. Note; that is just the lineart, he isn't colored in by any means.
I also would like to hear thoughts on the shading technique, it's something I have been playing with and I'd like to know how it's working.
Finally, how is the drawing over all?

[Lirrie]

The shading on him is beautifull and overall i think yo really got the sight hound part down but i really fouldnt ee any hyena in him. The chettah was distinguishable though.

[The_Tide_Keeper]

Bk13, the shading is fantastic, and the anatomy isn't too far off base. I like it :3