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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Duh » Wed May 30, 2012 1:04 pm

Medusa's Cascade wrote:Image
Okay, is this better?


amg I absolutely love the way you did the eyes quq She(or possibly he i dunno) looks so sweet
The back legs still look a bit long compared to the front ones though? Or maybe thats just me.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby dizzy hurricane. » Wed May 30, 2012 1:42 pm

Medusa's Cascade wrote:Image
Okay, is this better?

    So adorable! ;A; It is better~ ouo
    lol it looks like your line for the chest didn't connect all the way. I know it was just a sketch, though~ Just if it were lined, make sure to connect it! c:
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Wed May 30, 2012 2:41 pm

Yeah, this was probably the quickest sketch I've ever done. ;A;
@Duh~ ugh, you're right...
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is that better for the back leg?
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby dizzy hurricane. » Wed May 30, 2012 2:42 pm

Medusa's Cascade wrote:Image
is that better for the back leg?

    Looks better to me! c:
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby DoctorDraca » Wed May 30, 2012 4:47 pm

Poppin' in before leaving for school.

August, you did a really fine job! The pose is very dynamic and it just looks good.
The only thing I noticed was that the dewclaw on the front leg (that's on the ground) seems a little high up compared to the other leg.
I'd love to see this finished. C:

Mr. Milo, sadly I can't help much with cheetah anatomy but perhaps you can search for references and try to draw the head anyway. It's easier to redline mistakes then to draw something out of the blue. I'm also not sure whom is a feline specialist around here. I hope one appears to aid you, though.

Myponyisawesome, please read the rules before joining. You must comment on other people's art before posting your own.

Medusa's Cascade, your style is really adorable. Rounded and fluffy. It's perhaps because of your style, but the wolf doesn't seem to have a neck. Just a plump body with a head on top. The tail is also very thick, especially at the base. I do love how you did the eyes and mouth, and the sketch itself looks pretty neat. c:

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Wed May 30, 2012 6:26 pm

Nex wrote:Poppin' in before leaving for school.

August, you did a really fine job! The pose is very dynamic and it just looks good.
The only thing I noticed was that the dewclaw on the front leg (that's on the ground) seems a little high up compared to the other leg.
I'd love to see this finished. C:

Mr. Milo, sadly I can't help much with cheetah anatomy but perhaps you can search for references and try to draw the head anyway. It's easier to redline mistakes then to draw something out of the blue. I'm also not sure whom is a feline specialist around here. I hope one appears to aid you, though.

Myponyisawesome, please read the rules before joining. You must comment on other people's art before posting your own.

Medusa's Cascade, your style is really adorable. Rounded and fluffy. It's perhaps because of your style, but the wolf doesn't seem to have a neck. Just a plump body with a head on top. The tail is also very thick, especially at the base. I do love how you did the eyes and mouth, and the sketch itself looks pretty neat. c:

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thank you, and I'll work on those. C:
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby nopenope123 » Thu May 31, 2012 2:03 am

Nex, I´d suggest to use a little more shadow. The humans eye loves contrast, and don´t be scared to use to much shade. Otherwise, it looks awesome.

Medusa, love your style. The only thing is that all of them look kinda like fluffy cats. The leg anatomy is to feline, and maybe you should try to create a little mpore of a paw. And as Nex said, try doing a neck. And keep up with the style you have: it is very unique.

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Tazmir » Thu May 31, 2012 2:27 am

Medusa's Cascade - I think it looks perfectly fine now :3

.August - The sketch is absolutly stunning <.< I love that one...

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby DoctorDraca » Thu May 31, 2012 2:30 am

Thanks, Solem. I'll keep that in mind. c:

Lucretia, you cannot post a livestream link on the same page as another existing one.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Tazmir » Thu May 31, 2012 2:36 am

Nex - I clicked on the Livestream link from Solembum, but it says that its already over... is it still not allowed ?
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