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Re: The Artist Army

Postby McKellsen » Tue May 29, 2012 11:24 am

@WazzinGator: I love the lines and design! Very nice! One thing I noticed is the back of the neck should be curved outward instead of in. I am not very good with cat anatomy so I could be wrong. X3 Very good though!

I finished this image earlier this afternoon.
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If you have any comments or critique, please it on this thread or the image thread. ^.^ Thanks!
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Marmoset » Tue May 29, 2012 11:27 am

Anyone still streaming that I can watch, I'm sick in bed and terribly bored ;)
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Muggafinn » Tue May 29, 2012 11:29 am

@WazzinGator: That's really lovely! Just one thing seems a little off with the walk cycle, but I have a solution, I think. You may not have heard of them before, buy Muybridge walks are extremely helpful!
http://www.artsconnected.org/media/4d/a ... /98331.jpg
That's one there, of a tiger, but I find that one the most helpful for feline poses, and I use it for reference quite a bit. You'll notice that, if this cat was taking a step forward, with its back leg extended in such a manner, the front paw on the same side of the body would be just about to lift off the ground, not in mid-air. Sorry if it's confusing, just take a look at the link, it's one of the best tools for drawing felines walking.
I guess I could LS a bit, doing backgrounds: https://join.me/845-504-580
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby dizzy hurricane. » Tue May 29, 2012 12:09 pm

    lfsn ;; That looks extremely good! You need to teach me how to shade! c:

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    I sketched this out just now, it's a work in progress of my fursona. He's a tiger with no tail~
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    I need tips/crit on it before I draw the lines~ c:
    For reference, I Google'd 'tiger' and skimmed over the images just to make sure I was getting the anatomy right.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby itsdemonnxoxo » Tue May 29, 2012 12:29 pm

I seen this in the Sketches gallery.I was going threw it, because I wanted to draw something animationish. <3 I totally feel in love with it, when I seen that sketch.

@ ♫ sᴜᴍᴍᴇʀ ♪ sᴛᴏʀᴍ ♫ - I think you did an amazing job on it. ^^ Keep, up the work.

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Lock » Tue May 29, 2012 12:30 pm

lfsn wrote:@WazzinGator: I love the lines and design! Very nice! One thing I noticed is the back of the neck should be curved outward instead of in. I am not very good with cat anatomy so I could be wrong. X3 Very good though!

I finished this image earlier this afternoon.
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If you have any comments or critique, please it on this thread or the image thread. ^.^ Thanks!

Fffff that bird is so handsome. <33 The shape of the wings is seriously gorgeous.
I love how you did the shading though, it looks lovely. c: The only thing is that the foot closest to us looks like it's bent a little awkwardly. ^^
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby mistywren » Tue May 29, 2012 12:34 pm

@ ♫ sᴜᴍᴍᴇʀ ♪ sᴛᴏʀᴍ ♫ - :/ sorry this isn't the best and don't take it to literally since I'm not the best at felines. But I hope it helps
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby McKellsen » Tue May 29, 2012 12:42 pm

Lock wrote:
lfsn wrote:@WazzinGator: I love the lines and design! Very nice! One thing I noticed is the back of the neck should be curved outward instead of in. I am not very good with cat anatomy so I could be wrong. X3 Very good though!

I finished this image earlier this afternoon.
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If you have any comments or critique, please it on this thread or the image thread. ^.^ Thanks!

Fffff that bird is so handsome. <33 The shape of the wings is seriously gorgeous.
I love how you did the shading though, it looks lovely. c: The only thing is that the foot closest to us looks like it's bent a little awkwardly. ^^

Thanks!
I started on the feet right after I finished the sketch and they fail so badly! XD So I erased them and did them last. I will fix them when my mouse is fixed. XD Thanks again, everyone!
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby The_Tide_Keeper » Tue May 29, 2012 1:36 pm

New thread :D I'll take a break from stalking ~
WazzinGator wrote:
Hello~ ...
Did this the other day:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/oekaki/image/image.php?id=991096&size=large&format=auto&rev=5

It's definitely the best cat lines I've ever done. Any feedback is highly appreciated. Design belongs to Nimaine... I really wanted to add a background to this but Nimaine ordered it with out a bg. 8|


Muggafin had an excellent point, I'm going to start with saying I haven't drawn a cat in months so please take the images she gave you over this red line as far as the pose goes. Anyways, I redlined your image for you. My hand writing is very bad so I just noted them:
A The neck couldn't support the head, cats (especially the American short hair) have a lot of muscles, and aside from muscular legs you'll find that the neck is usually very sturdy.
B There are two points, one the back leg is longer and then that since the front paw is up the back must be up too! :).
C The two back legs should be still in this pose (I think XD). It would be the equivalent of you standing on one leg and having the other way behind you, you'd fall. Or at least that was my reasoning, I think that the two need to be firmly planted so that it wont fall.
D The watch needs to be higher up, with the way it was it would be stepped on each time that foot goes down and probably wouldn't stay on for very long lol. It helps me to compare to people, so that would be the equivalent of an ankle bracelet around your hill or even your foot.

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Oh and I did this person in about an hour and I'm very pleased :D Red line/crit welcome, I experimented with some blues and purples:
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby dizzy hurricane. » Tue May 29, 2012 1:43 pm

    Aéro. - Thanks so much! c: <3

    mistywren - Not the best at felines? Pffffft, rubbish! That's awesome, and it really helps a lot~ Thanks!
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