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Writing a warriors fanfic {Beyond Borders)

Postby Silxe » Mon Jul 23, 2018 12:15 pm

So after a loooooooooooong Hiatus, I'm getting back into warriors so much so that I'm in the middle of writing a fanfic, about some warrior cats OCs I have. Problem: This is my first fanfic. I'm not awful at writing, I consider myself perfectly-decent-I-guess, but I figured some help would only improve my work. I'll update constantly here and take polls, suggestions, comments, criticism, anything I can get my hands on. I hope you follow this story's production!

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/15485325/chapters/35948058
Summary
Set In the forest long before Skyclan is driven out, all five clans are present. Leading cat is a warrior named Blackheart. She Is a nice enough lanky black cat who hates hunting and fighting, and mainly does labour, such as carrying moss, changing bedding, and caring for elders and kits. Conflict arises as she has to deal with her growing crush on Skyclan warrior Goldencloud, Her leader's strange decisions, and, well, a whole lot I don't know if you want me to spoil just yet.


What have I accomplished?
I've gotten an outline written all the way up to chapter 13, three written chapters, and two uploaded chapters.
Story has been uploaded.

What I need help with right now
Opinons on the story and questions are appreciated.

Non-pressing questions I have
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {seeking beta reader}

Postby Silxe » Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:33 am

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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {seeking beta reader}

Postby Darkminnow » Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:42 am

I would like to be a beta reader, though I'm not online much so I'm not sure how often I would need to read?
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {seeking beta reader}

Postby Silxe » Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:58 am

Whenever you're available is fine! I'm not terribly picky about time. I'll just send you chapters when they're done, and you can get back to me when you're finished.
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {seeking beta reader}

Postby Endives » Wed Jul 25, 2018 6:05 am

wondering if you have room for a second beta reader hhh
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {seeking beta reader}

Postby Silxe » Wed Jul 25, 2018 6:10 am

Haha sure! Good to have another opinion on these things!
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Jul 27, 2018 6:07 am

I uh
probably won't be able to beta-read, but I'm interested to see what you're working on!
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {Beyond Borders)

Postby Silxe » Thu Aug 02, 2018 8:03 am

THE STORY IS UP!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/15485325/chapters/35948058
Allegiances and chapter one have been posted. Please check it out and tell me your thoughts!
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {Beyond Borders)

Postby Silxe » Mon Aug 13, 2018 4:25 pm

UPDATE!
Chapter 2 is up! Please see it and tell me about what you think!
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Re: Writing a warriors fanfic {Beyond Borders)

Postby Silxe » Tue Sep 25, 2018 7:31 am

Chapter update! go check it out please!
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