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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Sun Feb 03, 2013 9:28 am

I'm working on chapter two... if that's of any interest to any one...........
I would love it if some one said any thing about this story, even if all you say is -"I read it"....
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby icicle1107 » Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:52 pm

I read it!!!

Just thought I should let you know. ;)
I like it so far and am interested in seeing where it goes. Can't wait for next chapter!!! :mrgreen:
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Mon Feb 04, 2013 7:45 am

yay! thanks!
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:45 am

bump.....
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Tue Feb 05, 2013 3:11 pm

it may be a while before i get chapter 2 up, I am having a hard time with the time line, but I know where I want to go so I may work backwards for a while.....
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby icicle1107 » Wed Feb 06, 2013 11:08 am

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:20 pm

Guess what?? I didn't think it would happen anytime soon, but I wrote CHAPTER TWO!!! It's posted on front page, third post. I'm tired, It's 1:30 am and I was already tired at 9 pm so sorry if there is an excessive amount of grammar errors :)

EDIT: If you have read some of "MASH UP" (link in siggy) you will notice that I practiced a little bit of recycling with an old story, I altered it slightly and included it in chapter 2 (the part in the quote)
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:50 pm

table of contents updated, give me some critique, or comments please! (or simply vote in the poll)
I will probably have some editing to do in the morning..... that's okay, just tell me what I need to work on :D
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Sun Feb 10, 2013 6:15 am

bump, could some one give me some criticism, Please?
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Re: *Ƭнɛ Ǥяαʏɛƨт Ƨκʏ* ~ needs critique ~

Postby INK. » Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:00 pm

bump..... read above for info, I don't have enough time to say it again right now
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