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[NE0N-UMBR30N]

Semi Lit Story

[NE0N-UMBR30N]

Semi Lit Story

[NE0N-UMBR30N]

Semi Lit Story

[arcticwolf]

(boop just stalking that's not weird at all don't mind me)

FIrst of all, cute story. C: Ben's adorable and I'm awaiting the next part of the story. Good work, it's great!

Hmm... one thing I noticed was that after you write something in quotation marks, you don't add a space before the quotes nor a space after (ex: [...] weight."Sky.."He [...]). Same with commas, you don't add a space afterwards.
If that makes sense? Urgh not sure if it does. xD Anyways, there should be spaces there. I'm not sure why you chose not to put them, put I know it can turn some picky readers off. =P

You have a unique writing style. I'm not sure why it seems different to me, but it does, and that's a good thing because that definitely attracts readers.

[NE0N-UMBR30N]

I know I dont ^^;

I honestly dont have time to go back and do that right now however.

It'll be continued soon,but I need some help figuring out how to make her confess to him.

[arcticwolf]

I figured you knew but decided to say so just in case. :P

I'll let you know if I come up with any ideas for you. ^^ My mind is drawing a blank right now, heh.

[conquest;]

Bookmarking this ^^
So cute~

[NE0N-UMBR30N]

Ah okay.Thanks,just let me know.

Thank you<3

[NE0N-UMBR30N]

Bump<3

[NE0N-UMBR30N]

Bump<3