The Summer's Lost Rose

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Re: The Summer's Lost Rose

Postby Sprengja. » Fri Feb 08, 2013 4:55 am

Its very Good ❤
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Re: The Summer's Lost Rose

Postby blackberrycandy » Fri Feb 08, 2013 7:35 am

Sprengja. wrote:Its very Good ❤

Awww thanks <33
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Re: The Summer's Lost Rose

Postby blackberrycandy » Sun Mar 17, 2013 12:45 am

Wow, I totally forgot about this! Here's chapter 4! Enjoy! c:



Chapter 4

Rose?
Yes?
You ever loved someone so much, it hurts?
Yes.
Who?
You.
What about Will?
I love him, but I love you more.
Promise you'll never leave me?
I promise.
Love you Rose.
Love you more Summer.


Continuing alone, I cried. In the space of a few weeks, my entire life had up in smoke. Rose was gone, and I felt more alone then ever. I needed someone to save me, but I had no one. Me and mum were suffering in silence, alone. I knew we should be helping each other, but even talking seemed like an effort. Helping someone else was beyond reach. I felt week, and hopeless. I couldn't even do half decent pictures anymore, or even painting. Even getting new art things was no exciting novelty any more. My heart cried for Rose, and so did my soul.
Upon reaching the top of the hill, I wiped away my tears, and followed the path to the stables. My first glimpse of Lady was her in her pasture, her head down. She looked sad, and miserable. Apparently horses can read emotions. I bet she's reading Wills emotions. He's heartbroken.
I walked to the edge of the pasture, then sat on the fence, watching her. Eventually, she saw me, and came trotting over, her mane flying out behind her.
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