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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby .kestral » Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:55 am

How do I apply to be a crit?
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Jericho » Thu Nov 22, 2012 6:40 am

Kestral&Leo wrote:How do I apply to be a crit?

Don't quote me on this but I believe that to become a critique you must demonstrate your ability to critique, and express an interest in becoming a critique. I may be wrong though so again, don't quote me on this.

I will actually be pming Apple with an idea on how to get critiques.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Papyrsatyr » Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:02 am

Foxtrot55 wrote:
Kestral&Leo wrote:How do I apply to be a crit?

Don't quote me on this but I believe that to become a critique you must demonstrate your ability to critique, and express an interest in becoming a critique. I may be wrong though so again, don't quote me on this.

I will actually be pming Apple with an idea on how to get critiques.


More or less how you become one. Implemented it in the critic's section because I'm getting this question a lot. :3
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Auyn » Fri Nov 30, 2012 4:18 pm

Would someone be able to help me critique my form for the recent litter of WoI?

Thank you <3


I would like some critique on my form please!
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Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=52&t=1446820&start=60
Adoption Agency you are applying for: None, i'm applying for a WOI
Deadline for your form: Um....tommorrow ^^; I don't expect it to be some major critique, even a few tips would be helpful enough.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Sapphirescript » Sat Dec 01, 2012 6:24 am

I tried to help but I honestly cannot say a single bad thing about your Form, it's very nicely laid out, the descriptions are amazing and in depth and I really hope you win! Sorry I couldn't offer any crit but I hope a little piece of encouragement will help.
Very nicely done ^^.
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Auyn » Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:49 am

Tasha999 wrote:I tried to help but I honestly cannot say a single bad thing about your Form, it's very nicely laid out, the descriptions are amazing and in depth and I really hope you win! Sorry I couldn't offer any crit but I hope a little piece of encouragement will help.
Very nicely done ^^.


Thank you <3
I just hope i have enough art and history to win, as there are some tough competitions out there DX
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Ƥɛтαℓƨ » Mon Dec 03, 2012 1:32 pm

Username: {California Sky}
Link to Form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=58&t=724959&p=46266200#p46266200
Adoption place/agency: The Agency
Deadline: I believe it is Friday December 7th
Would you like your critique to be over PM or here: Here is fine
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby CalicoWolf » Tue Dec 04, 2012 7:14 am

I would like some critique on my story please!
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Link to what needs critiquing:
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Low Image - Whole thing
We took incite of what was said before. This month I hope things have improved a bit. I know the Staff Litter is a bit long. Since it was a big deal i wanted to do something special for them. Next year gotta thing up something better. lol Also, some of the monthly pet reviews will be different too, but overall I would like your thoughts and such. Really hope the less images help the concentration and loading since that is what was pointed out the most.
What is it: Newspaper/Magazine
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Jericho » Tue Dec 04, 2012 8:57 am

Busy today but I will be critiquing everything soon! Sorry for any delays and if you need it soon there are many other capable Critiques here that can all feel free to critique as well. The more opinions the better!
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Re: The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

Postby Lizbutt » Fri Dec 07, 2012 4:59 pm

I would like some critique on my photo please!
Username: Carry
Link to what needs critiquing: link here
What is it: a film photo; shot with a Canon TX
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Ether is fine; which ever is easiest.

a note: there was dust on the negative, but I personally think it gives the image character.

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