The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Physical-Pancakes]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:Physical-Pancakes
Link to what needs critiquing:The Drive In Theatre
What is it: Kind of just a short description story.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? whatever's easiest for you.

Also, I would like this story critiqued but I would also like to be a critic, upon reading your form it looked like I just start critiquing stuff on this topic, and if I'm good enough you'll put me on the list, is that correct or is there something else I need to know.

[WilloweWolf]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:WilloweWolf
Link to what needs critiquing:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2161448&hilit=bound
What is it:err... I guess yu could sya it's a novel...
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?: here.

[.Autumn.]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: .Autumn.
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=53&t=2222747&p=69264892#p69264892
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Jelly Bean Dragons
Deadline for your form: Sunday the 9th of March
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Doesn't matter. ^^

[Jericho]

Hello everyone,
I am working on getting your critiques done, the stories will take slightly longer and therefore I will be placing Autumn's form as higher priority as it holds a deadline unlike the stories. I apologies for the wait but you should be getting your critique within the next few days.
Thank you for your patience,
Fox

[.Autumn.]

Thank you so very much, fox! <3 I look forward to reading it. :3

[Medusa72]

Wow, lets dust this place up!

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: TheFacilePoet
Link to what needs critiquing: In siggy... The Arrangement
What is it: Novel in progress
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whichever.

It's watev's yall, you don't have to look at it, but I'd love it if you did.