→ purity's writing ← no posting please -Poll added-

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
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Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

So, what do you think?

Poll ended at Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:08 pm

Bookmarking!
4
100%
I like it!
0
No votes
It's okay.
0
No votes
Nothing to get excited about.
0
No votes
I think it could use some work.
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 4

→ purity's writing ← no posting please -Poll added-

Postby kavv » Thu Dec 20, 2012 9:01 am

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Welcome to my writing workshop. This is my personal thread for when I feel in the mood to write;
there will be a variety of different writings being posted here. I may use this as a place to store ideas
or character outlines. I would encourage you all to look around and maybe be inspired to start writing
your own novel / short story, but please, no stealing. Have a good day,
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Re: → beloved's writing ← no posting please

Postby kavv » Thu Dec 20, 2012 9:21 am

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rules
→ NO STEALING

For stealing is unoriginal and it is weak. Do not do it.

→ NO POSTING

To keep things organized, I would prefer for you not to post. Instead,
I would love it for you to leave me a p.m. with your critique /
encouragement. Thank you,
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Re: → beloved's writing ← no posting please

Postby kavv » Thu Dec 20, 2012 9:58 am

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index

→ post 1. Intro.
→ post 2. Rules
→ post 3. Index
→ post 4. Story Introduction
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Re: → beloved's writing ← no posting please

Postby kavv » Thu Dec 20, 2012 10:01 am

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Ever feel.. lost? Like one moment your fine, smiling even, but then it hits you. As if you were standing
in fate's path, it coming barreling towards you and you simply refused to see it- Until the inevitable
happens. It hits you. And it leaves you broken on the floor.
But you deserve it, don't you? You had so long to get out of it's path, to make things right. But for
some reason, you just didn't open your eyes. Why didn't you open your eyes? Why didn't you make
things right while you still could? Everything is now lost, ruined, because you refused to see.
Ever feel like that?


She closes the book, slowly, feeling the crisp pages slip past her fingers. You can tell at first glance that this book was old; it's pages turned brittle and yellow, it's cover worn from use. Well, it hasn't been used until the last year, but the pages were often turned, revealing every blank page that hides the secrets not yet written. This book has been past down from the girls mother to her, and her only now being brave enough to leave her mark on its pages.
She sighs with the burden that she has now passed on to the book. That's why she loves to journal; all of her joys are forever marked in the book, and whenever her eyes stray to those words, she remembers it all. And when she marks her pain and regrets on these pages, it releases the weight of her burdens. But she has to be careful of those wandering eyes, who seek to breach the walls of the cover of this book, and see for themselves what lies beyond it.
Many hands have grabbed for it; many words have stabbed at her about it. She always falls back to it though; her safety net. It is the only thing she is sure about lately. Everything has been crumbling rapidly around her, desperate to pick up the pieces that won't fit back together. But that is life, and it goes on, however cruel or brutal it may be. However broken and breathless it may leave you.

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Re: → beloved's writing ← no posting please -Poll added-

Postby kavv » Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:08 am

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Perhaps someday the revelation will burst in upon me and I will see
the other side of this monumental grotesque joke. And then I’ll laugh.
And then I’ll know what life is.
- Sylvia Plath.
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