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Re: plυɴɢe ❖ ɴo coммeɴтѕ oɴ тнreαd, pleαѕe.

Postby mamba » Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:09 am

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My writing is something I constantly obsess over. One of three things is going to happen to this piece of writing. I may never get past the prologue, or first few chapters. It is possible that I may just start hating this story and rip it off of Chicken Smoothie in anger. The third, and hoped, option is that I will finish this. It will become a novel, under my name. Edited, sold - everything. Guess what that means for you? If you copy it all charges will be pushed. That means lawyers, legal cases, and fines. Steal, and the consequences are yours to feel.
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Re: plυɴɢe ❖ ɴo coммeɴтѕ oɴ тнreαd, pleαѕe.

Postby mamba » Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:15 am

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This story is fixed around a couple, a rather wealthy pair of teens. They go out to a personal island of Roman's family- and decide to have some fun out in the ocean to celebrate their one year anniversary. Victoria leads her boyfriend, seventeen year old Roman, out into the deep waters of the Pacific, but what they find is nothing short of a shock. Death, despair, and a lust filled road await them- and their little plunge.
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Re: plυɴɢe ❖ ɴo coммeɴтѕ oɴ тнreαd, pleαѕe.

Postby mamba » Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:05 pm

so much wip.

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quote here.
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"It's my name, take it or leave it."
ƒìяsт: Valentine [Val-uhn-tahyn]was a name given from the same darkness in the young man's eyes, as well as his father's devotion to the beliefs of the shadowhunter who was killed. He too was a purist, as he called himself.
мìᗪᗪℓє: Dominic [dom-in-ick] was an honorary name to the child's paternal grandfather, Dominic Starr. The young shadowhunter carries it with pride, and he is glad to carry on a legacy of greatness.
ℓαsт: Winterstar [win-ter-stahr] has been his destined last name for centuries, even through the irony of what 'Morgenstern' truly means.
иìcκиαмє:Niko: Going by Valentine in a world full of angry shadowhunters isn't the smartest idea, so he goes by Dominic, or Niko.

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"Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional."
αɠє:Valentine is only seventeen. However, he looks a few years older than he is, which typically gets him some more credit with strangers.
ᗪαтє σƒ вìятн:Valentine was born in April. April twenty-sixth, to be specific. He isn't to admiring of the date, but doesn't find that a single day should ever matter too much.

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"Excuse me?"
ɠєиᗪєя:If you didn't notice the closely shaved hair, or the large jaw, maybe the wide shoulders caught your eye. Or the muscle mass, even the dark tone in his voice would draw your attention to the fact that he is a man.

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handsome. brave. dangerous. leading. tall.
єтниìcìтγ: Valentine is more than sixty percent Russian, and almost all of his other blood is French. A small bit of German has touched him, along with the tiniest hint of English. He speaks perfect Russian and French, and can communicate roughly in German. All of his features are predominantly Russian- the fair skin, dark hair, and strong nose just to start.
нєìɠнт: At six feet even, not many shadowhunters topple over Valentine in height. It is preferred to be small and nimble, not bear like. His body is rather evenly spread out, without any limb or section being noticeably long compared to the others.
ὠєìɠнт: Even though his body fat index is incredibly low, he still weighs one hundred and ninety pounds. The muscle in his body adds up to that rather large number. Valentine rarely gains or loses weight, and when he does the amount is always less than five pounds.
вσᗪγ вυìℓᗪ: He is what the mundanes would call a perfect linemen. What Valentine really is could be described as a bodygaurd. His wide build is perfect for intimidating others, as well as blocking spaces.
нαìя cσℓσя & sтγℓє: His hair is rather boring, being only a very dark brown. It appears black, but in direct sunlight it brightens to a deep chocolate.
єγєs: -.
sκìи тσиє: -.
ƒαcìαℓ ƒєαтυяєs: -.
ρìєяcìиɠs: -.
scαяs : -.
тαттσσ's: -.
иσямαℓ συтƒìт: -.
ڒєὠℓєяγ: -.
sρєcìαℓ мαяκs: -.










P!nk wrote:White knuckles and sweaty palms
from hanging on too tight
Clenched shut jaw,
I've got another headache again tonight
Eyes on fire, eyes on fire,
and they burn from all the tears
I've been crying, I've been crying,
I've been dying over you
Tie a knot in the rope,
tryin' to hold, tryin' to hold,
But there's nothing to grasp so I let go

I think I've finally had enough,
I think I maybe think too much
I think this might be it for us
(blow me one last kiss)
You think I'm just too serious,
I think you're full of it
My head is spinning so
(blow me one last kiss)

Just when it can't get worse,
I've had a bad day (NO!)
Have you had a bad day? (NO!),
we've had a bad day (NO!)
I think that life's too short for this,
I want back my ignorance and bliss
I think I've had enough of this,
blow me one last kiss.

I think I've finally had enough,
I think I maybe think too much
I think this might be it for us
(blow me one last kiss)
You think I'm just too serious,
I think you're full of it
My head is spinning so
(blow me one last kiss)

Just when it can't get worse,
I've had a bad day (No!)
Have you had a bad day? (No!),
we've had a bad day (No!)
I think that life's too short for this,
I want back my ignorance and bliss
I think I've had enough of this,
blow me one last kiss.

Na na na na - da da da da
Blow me one last kiss

Na na na na - da da da da
Blow me one last kiss

I will do what I please,
anything that I want
I will breathe, I will breathe,
I won't worry at all
You will pay for your sins,
you'll be sorry my dear
All the lies, all the why's,
will all be crystal clear

I think I've finally had enough,
I think I maybe think too much
I think this might be it for us
(blow me one last kiss)
You think I'm just too serious,
I think you're full of it
My head is spinning so
(blow me one last kiss)

Just when it can't get worse,
I've had bad day (No!)
Have you had a bad day? (No!),
we've had a bad day (No!)
I think that life's too short for this,
I want back my ignorance and bliss
I think I've had enough of this,
blow me one last kiss.

Na na na na - da da da da
Na na na na - da da da da
Na na na na - da da da da

Blow me one last kiss.

Na na na na - da da da da
Na na na na - da da da da
Na na na na - da da da da
Blow me one last kiss.
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            stubborn;; -.
            hot-headed;; -.
            determined;; -.
            intelligent;; -.
            clever;; -
            a fighter;; -.
            dangerous;; -.
            untouchable;; -.

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ℓìκєs: -


ᗪìs-ℓìκєs: -.


Taylor Swift wrote:Once upon a time a few mistakes ago
I was in your sights, you got me alone
You found me, you found me, you found me
I guess you didn't care, and I guess I liked that
And when I fell hard you took a step back
Without me, without me, without me

And he's long gone when he's next to me
And I realize the blame is on me

'Cause I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble

No apologies, he'll never see you cry
Pretend he doesn't know that he's the reason why
You're drowning, you're drowning, you're drowning
Now I heard you moved on from whispers on the street
A new notch in your belt is all I'll ever be
And now I see, now I see, now I see

He was long gone when he met me
And I realize the joke is on me, hey!

I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble

And the saddest fear comes creeping in
That you never loved me or her, or anyone, or anything, yeah

I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble

I knew you were trouble when you walked in
Trouble, trouble, trouble
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
Trouble, trouble, trouble
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cяυsн: "-"
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σяєитαтìσи: -.


ᗪαтìиɠ: -.


єẋєs: -.



γєαяs σƒ вєìиɠ α mutant: -


ραяєиτs: -


ὠєαρσи: -


ρσὠєяs: -.


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σтнєя: "-."
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Because there's nothing more beautiful
than the way the ocean refuses to stop
kissing the shoreline,
no matter how many times it's sent away.

~Sarah Kay
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