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MLP: Emerald Castle Stories Please read <3

Postby nerf this! » Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:28 pm

Characters
Gemstone Shine *The Queen*
Princess Ragewater *The Princess*
King Dagger Star *The King*
Cotton Candy *A Maid*
Sweet Tarts *A Maid*
Blood Dagger *A female killer*
Wisp Dreams *A friendly but killer spirit*

Pics coming ASAP
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Princess Rage Water's point of view

Postby nerf this! » Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:43 pm

This is the princess's part of view. Yay,first one! Enjoy :3
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I curled up in my bed while listening to the busy work of the maids and other fillies,mares and even more ponies working,eating,and enjoying their life.
"Princess,wake up!" A voice yelled.
I held up my hoof with sparkling gems and some glitter on it.
"Later. I want a few more minutes." I said,and rolled my ice-blue eyes.
The door then slammed shut.
I then jumped happily up off the bed,then walked to a closet.
"How wonderful!" I said,and smiled.
"Rage Water. We need to talk." A voice bellowed,and the large glass door opened.
It was the queen,Gemstone Shine.
"Rage Water,don't you notice the changes?" The frustrated mare said,whipping her mane to the left side.
"No! I just want to continue my life as a Princess!" I yelled,and stamped my hoof,letting glitter out of it.
"Princess! Calm down,my child! You changed certainly." She said,and her eyes turned into slits.
I looked at my mother in the eye,and she kept eye-contact.
"Mother,I just want to enjoy my life!" I yelled even louder,and a burst of green smoke filled the air. Toxic air.
Gemstone Shine coughed and sputtered,then left the room immediently.
"Hmph!" I said,and grabbed a night-gown,put it on,and sat on the bed. I sucked the toxic gas back in my mouth,and it took a while.
"THIS,will be my new look for now." I said.
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Blood Dagger's Point of View

Postby nerf this! » Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:53 pm

This is Blood Dagger's point of view. This may get kind of evil. Well,make that evil-evil. :twisted:
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I held a dagger in my mouth as I hid in a dark side of a corner.
"I'll teach that Princess's maid for sure!" I thought,and chuckled.
"There she is! Blood Dagger! GET HER!" A voice bellowed,deep and booming.
I have to run-or fight. These stallions have been chasing me since I became evil. Hmph.
"Get out of my way!" I yelled,and threw countless magic-daggers at them.
I then sprinted away,still holding a sharp dagger in my mouth.
"You're not getting away! Wait! NOT THERE! HAULT!!!!" A soldier yelled,very frustrated.
I ran into a corner,then rushed into the castle opening,still open.
I transformed into a pretty young mare,then walked in.
Stallions bowed.
"Hmph! HOW,they are. Thinking I'M a princess!" I thought,and smiled.
Just then,Cotton Candy walked up to me.
"There she is! I got her!" I thought,smiled,then walked up to her.
"Good morning ma'am."Cotton said,smiling.
"Morning." I said with eyes put into slits.
I walked behind her....held the dagger and...
"STOP IT!!! STOP THIS INSTANT!" A voice yelled. It was the king,mad and angry.
"Stop this nonsense! Guards!" He yelled.
I ran away as fast as possible,and the guards literally kicked me out.
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Sweet Tarts' point of View

Postby nerf this! » Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:14 pm

This is Sweet Tarts' point of view. She might get too scared ^^"
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Hearing guards yell,Sweet Tarts darted out of the kitchen,leaving the pie filling on the table.
"What happened here? Tell me!!" I said,hopping around.
"I was almost KILLED."Cotton Candy said,curling her poofy hair.
"Killed? Who wanted to kill you?" I said softly.
"I dunno. Rumors are that her name is Blood Dagger." She replied,and fixed her hair even more.
I stared at my best friend,then went back to making the pie.
After baking the pie,I sat down on a black and white rug.
Just then,a pony-like shadow crept around the room.
Then,a black hole formed.
"RUN FOR YOUR LIIIIIIFE!!!" I screamed,running for shelter. It was no use,but the rest ran away safely.
"I must kill myself..."I thought,and let go of a table about to be sucked in.


It was all dark.
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Wisp Dreams point of view

Postby nerf this! » Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:08 pm

This is Wisp Dreams' point of view.
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"Hello, ponies." I said in a deep voice,looking at them.
"Get us out of here!" They all yelled.
Just then, one stepped up.
It was maid Sweet Tarts.
"What do you want, weak pony?" I bellowed.
"Get us out of here, I mean it!" Sweet Tarts commanded.
"Never!" I yelled after her, and my voice echoed as long as I could remember.
Everypony took a step back.
"Get us out! Get us out!" They chanted.
"NO!" I yelled.
Just then, a magic yellow tube,looking as if it were made of magic, came into sight, sucked in the ponies, and a picture came into my mind.
They were on solid ground,and
"What will you do now, Wisp?" A voice yelled.
I recognized the voice,and it was Princess Ragewater.
The tube then got sucked out, and I was left with a room, an icy-grey floor and vases with souls inside.
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Blood Dagger's Point of View *2*

Postby nerf this! » Mon Feb 18, 2013 1:20 pm

This is BD's point of view....again ^^"
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I transformed to my normal self with a wicked face on.
"How rude..."I thought.
Kicking me out was the right time for revenge. So,I put on a green hood,hiding my cutie mark which was a skull bleeding toxic.
I walked throughout the forest,seeing pathetic animals roam around.
"Pathetic!" I yelled.
I didn't know that the Princess was nearby,so she walked up to me.
"Miss Blood Dagger,GET OUT!" She screamed,and kicked me with her hind legs.
"I shall never be defeated!!!" I yelled,and threw magic daggers at her.
It was too late-she dodged them,then made a mini-tsunami all around me.
I'll be done for sure..........

Until Wisp Dreams came. She saved me with her magical horn and wings. I was lucky,alright.
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