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Postby ottery » Sat Jun 01, 2013 8:02 pm

Hi welcome to my first story Transfixed which is about something I have no idea enjoy

And here in this hopefully giant space will be the fans

FANS
•GREATEST FAN EVER•~

Fan - Art

Characters-(will add when I get to them)

Grace- is 5'5 has dark brown hair that is usually in a braid and wears blue robes

Xavier - is the husband of Grace with untidy black hair wears red robes

Ariana- is the offspring of Grace and Xavier she is 1 year old when this book starts

By the way this story starts in medevil times in a small village
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Re: Transfixed on you

Postby ottery » Sat Jun 01, 2013 8:02 pm

Transfixed

•PROLOUGE•

Grace sat in the shadows her heart pounding, "Xavier?" Grace hissed, she waited for an answer in the silent wood "Xavier is Ariana alright" Grace bit her lip thinking of the soldiers knocking on the door then the panic in Xavier's voice as he told her to get food and basic essentials while he would grab their 1 year old daughter Ariana. then running to the wood nearby where they would meet up. Grace was suddenly pulled out of the memory when she heard a yell ,a cry ,then the rattle of shackles. turning around she saw the tall men with bulky armour pulling an unconscious Xavier to the castle while a woman in pale brown robes held a fussy Ariana in her arms. Cursing Grace fled promising to get her child back no matter what.
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Re: Transfixed

Postby ottery » Sat Jun 01, 2013 8:03 pm

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Re: Transfixed

Postby ottery » Sat Jun 01, 2013 8:03 pm

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