Looks too Bold. like it's wearing an overdose of eyeliner. Thin that down, or blend it in with a background. Everything's also very "hard" Use different colors and try to shade. Make the iris and pupil a little bigger
I'm just helping, Dont think of this as an insult. And this isnt very important, it's just tips. if you decide to draw that way, ignore this
Haha yeah, I know, it was a "I'm bored" drawing again, I'm playing AQ Worlds and my friend went afk for a bit so I scribbled this down xD But thanks for the tips :3