by Susiron » Tue May 29, 2012 5:39 am
Salt, PLEASE follow the rules. This thread isn't even a day old, and we shouldn't have people breaking its rules already. If you need to, please refresh yourself about the rules.
You need to be commenting/critiquing on the works of other users, ESPECIALLY if you're going to be reposting the same thing for further critique.
This goes as a note to everyone-- let us keep the thread friendlier this time, with more cooperation and conversation between our fellow Artist Army patrons.
Also to be noted: If someone critiques or comments on your work, it is only common courtesy to thank them.
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Raptor,
Ohh, nice looking character-- I love his face, especially the beak shape. : D
Hrmm, for critique on design, I'd say maybe balancing his markings some more? I love the colours picked, but he would flow better perhaps if you had lighter colours on the bottom as well. Just a light orange belly, or paw socks, or even just some specks-- just something to lighten him up to the opposite degree?
For anatomy, still say I'm loving that beak. < 3 -- the position of the eye also looks wonderful, as do the ears. :3
Leg-wise, I'd say maybe make him a bit taller in that department. Pronouncing his shoulders more, and lowering the ankles on his hind legs-- since felines tend to have much shorter metatarsals-- would also look nice.
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Susiron on Tue May 29, 2012 6:22 am, edited 5 times in total.