The Artist Army

[jules_]

-Solembum

It looks great, I love what you did with the coloring of the hair. All I could suggest is to make the arms a bit longer, if you stand up, your arms will hand below your waist.

[lululizzy23]

Sweet, new thread ~
/rolls all over it

Could I please get critique and a redline (if possible) on this piece? ^_^;
It's gift art for a friend, so I want to make it as good as I possibly can.

Here's a link to the full picture.

Ahh, a nice new thread.
FAT UNICORN! YOU'RE BACK :D
Well, like someone said, the horn is too small.
The face is a little long and the nose is too small (or is it short?).
I'm only critiquing the unicorn though, the wolf looks fine to my eyes c:

Now, for some of my art.

I was wondering if I could get some crits on this chibi-ish little dragon thing. It's not supposed to be realistic but maybe I could get some anatomy help. (Although this is how the species was drawn. It's not my character nor do I know the species name.)

[Lacrirosa]

Now, for some of my art.

I was wondering if I could get some crits on this chibi-ish little dragon thing. It's not supposed to be realistic but maybe I could get some anatomy help. (Although this is how the species was drawn. It's not my character nor do I know the species name.)[/center][/color]

I'm not really good with the anatomy of a dragon but I think there is something wrong with the muzzle.
A dragon is more fierce.
Here's something I think that can help: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&secti ... e#/d1j08l7

What you have so far is very good! I can't do that well<3
You should try to show the scales of the dragon though, and maybe make the neck a bit wider where the horns are at?

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As for my art, I do Not want any critics please, but what I would like is some help with ideas?
I created a few batchs already, one being this:
http://www.iaza.com/work/120527C/iaza19675310539800.png

A Lolita set.
I'm thinking of working on sort of a Cute Maid set or something?

I don't know, I hate to ask for ideas but I just wanted to see what the people wanted c:

If you guys were going to buy adoptables - human, even if you really aren't interested, what would you like to see?
So far I'm only doing what appeals to me...Dx

[shibuki]

Sweet, new thread ~
/rolls all over it

Could I please get critique and a redline (if possible) on this piece? ^_^;
It's gift art for a friend, so I want to make it as good as I possibly can.

Here's a link to the full picture.

This is pretty darn amazing <33

I'm not much for anatomy, so I'm not good at crits, but again, the horn looks very small

otherwise it is amazing <333

[lululizzy23]

Thanks for the critique <33

[dizzy hurricane.]

-sniff- New Thread smell. :D

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Fat Unicorn - It looks really, really good! c: The first thing I noticed was the thin horn, again. The forelock looks a little flat, too, maybe add some stray strands or something to make it appear more alive? { If that made any sense }

-Solembum - It looks really good! ouo It's kind of hard to help with anatomy when it's anime/chibi, but I noticed that the fluffy part of the tail looked a little odd. It didn't come off the tail right, so maybe a smoother transition? { Just for next time c: }

lululizzy23 - It looks good! c: I'm not good with dragon anatomy, so I can't help you, but something looks off. Maybe the eyes?

I Am The Broken Rose - That's really cool! I can't help you with ideas, because you lost me at Lolita and Cute Maid. .-.

[Lacrirosa]

Lol, thank you anyway Storm<3
I know the stuff I'm planning to do/did isn't everyone's favorite so thats why I wanted some help but ehh, I'll get something good eventually in the line of ideas!

[lululizzy23]

Thank you Storm, yes, the eyes were kind of a test and fail thing...

[Salt]

Well, a made a Fursona for my friend and is the any possible critique for me? Anatomy, design, concept? c:


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[brian emo]

Since I never got crits before the old thread closed, anyone have any? ^^